The Legion #5

<EM>The Legion</EM> #5 cover

Date:

April 2002

Title:

“Credo”
(Cover Title: “Lost Souls”)

Plot:

Spark, Saturn Girl, Wildfire, and Invisible Kid are attacked by the Kwai, but convince them to take the Legionnaires to see Enkenet.  The Kwai Township has become a refugee camp for a myriad of races who fled the Progenitor, including a number of Progeny.  Invisible Kid and Spark are more sympathetic to the Progeny’s current fate than Saturn Girl and Wildfire, who encountered them in the past.  Enkenet is wary of sending her warriors to be the Legion’s guides.  Meanwhile, a group called the Credo attempts to stir up racial unrest on the Township, and tries to kill the Progeny refugees.  The Legionnaires, including the reluctant Saturn Girl, fight them off.  The Credo flee and eventually reconnect with their leader, Singularity.

Credits:

Dan Abnett / Andy Lanning (Story) • Peter Snejberg (Art) • Tom McCraw (Colors) • Digital Chameleon (Separations) • Comicraft (Letters) • Mike McAvennie (Editor) • Olivier Coipel / Andy Lanning / Richard & Tanya Horie (Cover)


CHANGE HISTORY

Date of Change
Content of Change
03/03/03
Posted
06/24/04
Tracking updates from The Legion #32

Tinted cells and text indicate missing or incomplete information.

Character and Object Tracking

         

Name

Previous Appearance

Next Appearance

Heroes

Spark (Ayla Ranzz) The Legion #4 The Legion #<9>
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) The Legion #4 The Legion #<9>
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”)
The Legion #4 The Legion #<9>
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg) The Legion #4 The Legion #<9>
Shikari No appearance; mention only
Element Lad (Jan Arrah) No appearance; mention only
Live Wire (Garth Ranzz) No appearance; mention only
Monstress (Candi Pyponte-Le Parc III)
No appearance; mention only

Villains

Progenitor (Jan Arrah) No appearance; mention only
Herros (Kwai Credo The Legion #4 The Legion #32
Rayl (four armed Credo) None The Legion #32
Nox (bird Credo) None The Legion #32
Brek (ice bear Credo) None The Legion #32
jellyfish Credo None The Legion #32
Ngangan (canine Credo) None None to date
Singularity (footnote #1)
Legion Lost #8 The Legion #32
 
One-shot or Untracked Villains:
     assorted Credo

Supporting Characters

Leos (Kwai)
The Legion #4 None to date
Enkenet
Legion Lost #3 The Legion #32
 
One-shot or Untracked Characters:
     unnamed Kwai warriors (at least 3)
     unnamed Kwai council members (at least 6)

Locations

Rosette (remains)
The Legion #4 None to date
Kwai Township (exterior and interiors, including Enkenet’s reception chamber and the bilge decks)
Legion Lost #3 The Legion #32
 
One-shot or Untracked Locations:
     unnamed city and world, Kwai galaxy

Alien Races and Creatures

Kwai Legion Lost #3 The Legion #<9>
Progeny (footnote #2) (including children) Legion Lost #12 None to date
Resource Raider
None None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Races:
     assorted Kwai galaxy alien races

Technology

Tromium crystals The Legion #4 None to date
Kwai fire staves The Legion #4 The Legion #32
Legion cruiser The Legion #4 < >
Threshold portal No appearance; mention only
Transuit Legion Lost #10 < >
Credo ships and tanks
None None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Items:
     assorted alien spaceships
     gambling materials
     Legion-issue energy bars
     flying rifle sled
     Rayl’s blasters

1. Previously served in a Hero role.

2. Not acting as Villains in this story.

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Analysis Notes

Cover The clawed hands on the cover are probably the Kwai warriors from the first scene, but none can be identified clearly as Leos or Herros.
Butt shot!
1 The crystals behind the Legionnaires are apparently all that is left of the merged Progenitor (formerly Element Lad) and the Omniphagos, charged by the remnants of Live Wire’s power.  (This doesn’t count as an appearance for the corpse of any of them, however.)
Legion translators rather than telepathic earplugs?
Proverso is the universal language of Kwai-space, parallel to Interlac.  (Note that its name stems from that of Progenitor.)
Leos (pink hair, orange loincloth) is the Kwai in the lower right.  Herros is the Kwai in the upper left; by means of elimination, that is the only one who could have blue hair and a purple loincloth.
2:1 Is the “disperse and evade” / “decoy and fade” rhyme intentional?
“Say no more”?  Why not be thinking it, since Imra is a telepath?
Herros is in the lower left, Leos is in the upper right.
2:2 “Path-kin” may refer to actual familial relations.  It could relate to a simple teammate relationship, but Shikari used it with other Kwai but has never done so with Legionnaires, so that’s doubtful.
Wildfire is the yellow trail, Saturn Girl is the pink, and Spark is the blue.
2:4-5 These panels count as appearances for Invisible Kid, since we can tell where he is even if we can’t see him.
3:3 This is Leos fighting Wildfire.
3:5 “Kwai of the Path”: this may imply that there are other Kwai.  Perhaps the Path is the name of the Kwai Township?
Herros is in the purple loincloth.
4:1 It has probably been a year for the Kwai since the brief visit by the Legionnaires, and only two of these four were part of that group.  The Kwai culture may also make less note of such identifying factors as costumes and logo icons than we do.
4:4 By way of review: Progenitor was originally Element Lad, one of the Legionnaires.  When the Legion Outpost was sucked through the rift, it was cast out of space and time. Element Lad managed to bring them back to real space, but to a different galaxy.  In the process, he was separated from them and cast billions of years into the past.  Wildfire was also cast into the past, but as a formless energy cloud, he experienced the intervening time differently and didn’t go mad in the process.  (The other Legionnaires were kept in suspended animation for some unknown period of time until Shikari found them.  They might have been thrown through time as well, but the coincidence of them being woken up after billions of year to within weeks of when they were cast out of space and time is massive; far better to assume they were reinserted at about the proper point in time and slept just for days or weeks.)
5:1 None of these ships is recognizable as being a reference to other science fiction sources.  One directly below the Legion cruiser looks like a glass topper to a Christmas tree, and one behind it might be the crystalline ship from A Distant Soil.
Another notable curiosity is the “mouse”-shaped one in the lower right.
The flying Kwai might be Herros or Leos, but can’t be identified for such as either one.
Dialogue balloon is from Saturn Girl.
6:1 Gambling for what little wealth they have.
The lead Kwai is Leos. Behind him are Saturn Girl and Wildfire.  Next are Spark and Herros, and then the green-haired Kwai. Invisible Kid is, um, maybe invisible here?
6:2-4 These Progeny young are seen again on page 18.  Note the stuffed animal one carries.
6:4 Ayla comes from an agricultural world, and she has made comments in the past about not eating meat.  She may be more prone toward empathy for other beings than some humans.
6:5 This sets up an interesting conflict.  It’s also a clear parallel to discussions in the real world about war crimes and similar atrocities.
7:2 Imra’s thoughts on this are colored by her feelings, and she comes close to making a personal attack on Lyle; is she being a “strong woman” or is she being a “bitch”?  The scene is written by males: is Imra therefore being written as basically a male character in drag and thus being confrontational rather than trying to find a non-conflict method of resolving the situation? I don’t have answers for these questions.  They are more just observations on the “boys adventure” nature of superhero comics, the ways women are often perceived to interact in online discussion forums (either “do we have to argue to discuss” or risk a “bitch” designation by going toe-to-toe with the guys), and that superhero stories almost never have these sorts of discussion, preferring to beat the tar out of someone as a means of showing personality conflicts.
8:1 They didn’t create the technology.  Brainiac 5 adapted it from the ancient prison which housed the Omniphagos.
No way to tell if any of the Kwai in this scene are Leos or Herros.  Since this looks like a council of elders, probably not.
9:2 Dan and Andy seem to still be trying on “Lone Star” as a codename for Shikari.
9:3 Wildfire doesn’t want to be stuck between Lyle and Imra, especially if they were to encourage him to take sides.
9:4-5 Notice what there apparently is none of here: a (sexual) attraction between Imra and Lyle.  If they transcend their differences here, they could become tight platonic friends, something that isn’t displayed too often amongst superheroes (and especially teenage ones).  (Of course, there was a time when the creative team intended for Lyle to be gay, so the platonic relationship could be influenced by that.)
10:1 Brek is the ice bear (its powers are seen in 14:4).  Note the issue this raises, since Brek Bannin is the traditional real name of Polar Boy, who has already been introduced in the postboot continuity (<was his real name given?>).  Presumably this is mostly a joke name: this Credo member is “Polar Bear”.
10:2 The Credo emblem has a five-pointed flower with another five-pointed flower inside it.  Since there are five Credo here, it seems likely that the Credo are split into five-person squads, perhaps four privates plus a corporal.  (And by extension, units of five squads plus a sergeant, divisions of five units plus a lieutenant, and so on up the chain.)
11:2 Yes, it is: Imra was doing that on a personal basis, not trying to recruit others to do it en masse.  (Well, she did try to influence her teammates in that direction.)  Different in degree, and undoubtedly in intent, but perhaps not on a fundamental level.
11:4 To the other refugees here, the Legionnaires are just a pair of beings from yet another race, probably speaking an unintelligible language.  Pay them no mind.
11:5 “Part of the one”: that’s fascism at its root, being one stick in a bundle and thus stronger as a group than individually.  (That’s also the root word of “faggot”; the bundle of sticks, not the gay epithet.)
11:6 From page 6, it doesn’t look like the presence of the Progeny is any secret, although perhaps where they were staying isn’t broadly known.
12:2 Just a hint of the underside of a refugee camp.
12:3 <Didn’t we see Legionnaires with energy protein bars or some such in the belt pouches once before?>
12 It’s interesting to note that in the preboot, Wildfire had a reputation as a bit of a hothead, but here he is the calm, centered one of the bunch.  Of course, he did have a few billion disembodied years to mull things over, and the benefit of two merged personalities to help balance things out a bit.
13:1 The armored figure in the middle is Herros, in his war-skin.
13:2 Confirmation that the Progeny are evolved pill bugs.
14:4 “The One”: foreshadowing of the revelation on page 21.
15:2, 15:4 This slashing of the transuit echoes what Tangleweb did to Andromeda’s suit in < >.
15:4 It’s not clear why Spark would still be wearing her transuit.  The Legionnaires have been wearing them all along, but it’s not like there’s an atmosphere issue on the Township.
16:1 The patch probably involves wrapping the affected area in a similar material and inducing a chemical reaction it in to bond with the original transuit.
16:4 Note that Brek’s ice broke the hoses on Wildfire’s back.  This should prevent him from directing his powers through his jetpack to allow him to fly (or at least limit that flight ability significantly).
17:1 This counts as an appearance for Invisible Kid.
17:1-2 A couple seconds must have elapsed between these panels.  Brek had to move from behind Rayl, and the word “now” indicates a time lapse.
18:1 Saturn Girl and Invisible Kid must have split up to find Spark, heading in different directions in the bilge decks.  Lyle just happened to get there first.
18:3, 18:5 As noted, this is the child Progeny (heh) from 6:3-4.
18 Does a dying child awaken a certain maternal instinct in Imra, something she won’t have the chance to explore since Garth died?
19:2 This counts as dialogue for Saturn Girl.
19:3-5 Moral of the story: don’t fuck with a telepath.
20:1 Dialogue is from Saturn Girl.
20:3 The Kwai will have repaired Wildfire’s suit.  It’s made of Kwai use-weave, after all.
That is Leos next to Spark.
20:5 Enkenet’s response won’t be revealed until The Legion #9.
21:2 Note the Credo member between Singularity’s legs, with green skin and yellow eyes: that appears to be a Resource Raider, as yet unseen in the postboot continuity.
21:4 Recall that the Legion was who broke Singularity out of the illusion he had lived in for so long, shattering his dream of a perfect (if false) world.
21:5
That is not Blue Devil in the background.
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Appearance Counts

Character Name

Cover

Panels / Speaking

Heroes
Spark (Ayla Ranzz) X 37 / 22
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) X 43 / 35
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”) X 32 / 18
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg)
X 38 / 22
Villains
Herros (Kwai Credo) 22 / 10
Rayl (four armed Credo) 23 / 19
Nox (bird Credo) 11 / 3
Brek (ice bear Credo) 15 / 7
jellyfish Credo 11 / 0
Ngangan (canine Credo) 9 / 4
Singularity
5 / 6
Supporting Characters
Leos (Kwai) 14 / 9
Enkenet
4 / 4
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