The Legion #3

The Legion #3 cover

Date:

February 2002

Title:

“Legion World”

Plot:

The Lost Legionnaires are welcomed aboard the Bouncing Boy, shuttled to the captured Footstep Drive ship, and taken to the Zatar Nebula, the hiding location of Brande’s new project, Legion World.  They learn the wonders of the project — planetary environments replicating each world of the United Planets — and meet new Legionnaire Gear.  On Luna, President McCauley prepares a terraforming operation, but one he has had some special alterations added to.  In deep space, M’Onel finds out that McCauley has been duping him, hiding things from him for a year.  On Winath, the Legionnaires retrieve Spark, and she prepares to accompany Saturn Girl, Wildfire, and Invisible Kid back to Kwai-Space to convince them to join the new Legion’s effort; once there, they find indications of lightning pulses.  On Earth, M’Onel confronts President McCauley, only to have red solar lights turned on him, at which point McCauley beats the crap out of M’Onel and then reveals himself to actually be… Ra’s al Ghul.

Credits:

Dan Abnett / Andy Lanning (Writer) • Olivier Coipel (Pencils) • Andy Lanning (Inks) • Tom McCraw (Colors) • Digital Chameleon (Separations) • Comicraft (Letters) • Mike McAvennie (Editor) • Olivier Coipel / Andy Lanning / Richard and Tanya Horie (Cover)


CHANGE HISTORY

Date of Change
Content of Change
09/02/02
Posted
10/09/02

Name revisions from The Legion #4 and The Legion #11
Tracking correction from The Legion #4
Typo correction

12/29/02

Tracking updates from Legion Worlds #3

10/09/03

Tracking update from Legion Worlds #6

10/17/03

Tracking update from Legion Worlds #6

09/07/04

Tracking update from The Legion #35


Tinted cells and text indicate missing or incomplete information.

Character and Object Tracking

         

Name

Previous Appearance

Next Appearance

Heroes

Triad (Luornu Durgo) The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Leviathan II (Salu Digby) Legion Worlds #3 (story #1) The Legion #4
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg) Legion Worlds #3 (story #1) The Legion #4
Ultra Boy (Jo Nah)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Kid Quantum II (Jazmin Cullen)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Umbra (Tasmia Mallor)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Brainiac 5 (Querl Dox)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Chameleon (Reep Daggle)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Shikari
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
M’Onel (Lar Gand)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Gear (I.Z.O.R.) Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #119 The Legion #4
Sensor (Princess Jeka Wynzorr) Legion Worlds #6 (story #2) The Legion #4
Spark (Ayla Ranzz) Legion Worlds #2 (story #1) The Legion #4
Live Wire (Garth Ranzz) No appearance; mention only
XS (Jenni Ognats) Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Karate Kid (Val Armorr)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Gates (Ti’julk Mr’asz)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Ferro (Andrew Nolan)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Apparition (Tinya Wazzo-Nah)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Star Boy (Thom Kallor)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Element Lad (Jan Arrah) (footnote #1)
No appearance; mention only
Monstress (Candi Pyponte-Le Parc III)
No appearance; mention only
 
Andromeda (Laurel Gand) (footnote #2)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board
Thunder (Cece Beck) (footnote #2)
Appears only as holo on Mission Monitor Board

Villains

Ra’s al Ghul
     (also appears as President Leland McCauley)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Twine (real name unknown)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
C.O.M.P.U.T.O.
     (appears only as Mr. Venge)
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Lightning Lord (Mekt Ranzz) Legion Worlds #2 (story #1) The Legion #10
Abyss (real name unknown)
No appearance; mention only
Brainstorm (real name unknown)
No appearance; mention only
Progenitor (Jan Arrah) (footnote #1)
No appearance; mention only
Oversight Watch
No appearance; mention only

Supporting Characters

Chuck Taine Legion Worlds #3 (story #1) The Legion #4
R.J. Brande
Legion Worlds #6 (story #2) The Legion #4
 
One-shot or Untracked Characters:
     unnamed Orandan delegate
     assorted citizens, V.I.P.’s, and press

Locations

Luna Legion Worlds #1 (story #1)
The Legion #4
Zatar Nebula None <None to date>
Legion World
     (exterior and assorted planetary interiors)
None The Legion #4
Earth Legion Worlds #1 (story #1)
<The Legion #10>
Rimbor
No appearance; mention only
Xanthu
No appearance; mention only
Oomir Gulf None None to date
Winath
No appearance; mention only
Vyrga
No appearance; mention only
Kwai-Space
Legion Lost #12 The Legion #4
Rosette (remains)
Legion Lost #12 The Legion #4
 
Bridge, Bouncing Boy None <None to date>
Lunar Terraformer (exterior) None The Legion #4
Ranzz Homestead, Winath (pluberry orchard) Legion Worlds #2 (story #1) None to date
Mission Monitor Room, Legion World None The Legion #4
United Planets Presidential Tower (and surrounding buildings), Metropolis Secret Files & Origins Guide to the DC Universe 2001-2002 (story #5) The Legion #4
President McCauley’s office, United Planets Presidential Tower
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
 
One-shot or Untracked Locations:
     launch podium, Lunar Terraformer
     bridge, Footstep Drive ship

Alien Races and Creatures

Orandan
No appearance; mention only
Robotica
No appearance; mention only
Kwai
No appearance; mention only
Linsnerian
No appearance; mention only
 
One-shot or Untracked Races:
     interdimensional inviso-snakes

Technology

Bouncing Boy (ship) The Legion #2 <None to date>
Footstep Drive ship Legion Worlds #6 (story #1) The Legion #<9>
Floating platform Legion Worlds #6 (story #2) <None to date>
Legion flight rings Legion Worlds #5 (story #1) The Legion #< >
Threshold Portal None (footnote #3)
The Legion #7
Omnicom
The Legion #2 The Legion #4
Titanet
No appearance; mention only
Pluberries Legion Worlds #2 (story #1) None to date
Legion cruiser None of this design The Legion #4
Image inducer < > (footnote #4)
The Legion #4
Red solar lights
< > The Legion #4
 
One-shot or Untracked Items:
     Planetary Nutrient Distributor Node
     Stargate 884
     pluberry pickers
     Falcon Studios hat

1. Jan is listed twice, as both Element Lad (Hero) and Progenitor (Villain), since he is mentioned as both.

2. Laurel and Cece formally resigned from the Legion.

3. The Legion-created version of the portal; other versions were seen in Legion Lost.

4. Ra’s al Ghul has been using one prior to this, of course, but it is only tracked where it is explicitly mentioned or seen being used to transition appearances.

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Analysis Notes

Cover The February 2002 covers from DC Comics were part of an event dubbed “Full Coverage,” where the usual logos were replaced by prominent placement of the book’s title in the actual cover art.  Here, the title has been transformed into Interlac, which reads “the legion / abnett / lanning / coipel”; done correctly, there should have been vertical bars before each letter which is typically capitalized.
     “Full Coverage” worked well for some comics, less so for others.  In this case, while the use of Interlac makes it very cool for the readers in-the-know, it is hard to decipher for casual readers — and hence the title printed in English at the top of the cover.  Also, the embedded title is at the bottom of the cover, which means it can’t be seen at all in many comic shops racking systems, where either a shelf lip or comics on lower shelves will cover the bottom third or half of the cover.
For an unknown reason, the initial released image of the cover had the creator credits as junk, rather than what was presumably already known to be Abnett, Lanning, and Coipel.  The original cover text said “the legion / jvdwsdu / kdnyoko / ujmoaz3”; perhaps they were in a hurry to release it and just slammed on the keys to get some text in the fields?
While the hand holding the Omnicom on the cover could be basically anyone, one person is seen using an Omnicom in this issue.  We will therefore credit M’Onel as the hand on the cover.
1:1 The ship is the Bouncing Boy, piloted by Chuck Taine.  Note that the color scheme matches that of the preboot Bouncing Boy character.
1:2 Why, oh why, does Vi always have to be a giant these days, especially in cramped quarters like this?
Observe the all-in-one design of Triad’s pants and boots.  Note also that Triad-Neutral’s tailcloth is split in color, but counterchanged from that of her top.
2/3:1 Saturn Girl and Cosmic Boy are still close friends, having founded the Legion together.  She is still reeling from Live Wire’s death, of course, while he has had a year to come to grips with all them being believed dead.
The grunge on the boots of some of the Legionnaires is from walking through the sewers in the previous issue.
Triad-Purple, the more aggressive one, is making the “The Legion is back!” comment.
Shikari seems shy.  She actually met Cosmic Boy’s group behind the scenes in the previous issue, after Triad rescued her, but she doesn’t yet feel a part of them, perhaps.
At no time does anyone ask for details on Wildfire and Shikari.  It’s likely that the reporters in The Legion #1 sussed out that Wildfire was formerly ERG-1; perhaps he even gave a mini-interview before McCauley’s folk whisked the Legionnaires away.  Even if the general public didn’t know, Invisible Kid would have figured it out, and Saturn Girl could quickly let everyone know the details.
2/3:2 Typo: “Footship” should be “Footstep”.
2/3:3 Fortunately, Lyle and Querl won’t have to examine it too far before finding out the details, and will thus be spared some of the horrors they would find.  Hopefully it was only the presence of a half-Carggite (Apparition) with some exposure to both telepathy and teleportation (or perhaps the baby) in The Legion #9 which brought the poor creature at the heart of that ship’s drive to anything close to sentience
4:2 This is presumably a temporary polymer shield atmosphere space set up just for the launch.
“McCauley” cannot be identified here, so no panel appearance is counted.
4:3 This is Twine, Mr. Venge, and Ra’s al Ghul as McCauley.
4:4 “McCauley” doesn’t want to see the Orandan delegate because Orandans are illusionists.  Since McCauley is actually Ra’s al Ghul using an image inducer, he fears that the Orandan might see through the disguise, or might at least become suspicious.
Note that the “war room briefing” contradicts what “McCauley” publicly said about Robotica in Secret Files & Origins Guide to the DC Universe 2001-2002 (story #5).
No panel appearance is counted for “McCauley” or Venge since we can’t see their bodies.
5:1 Dialogue is from Chuck Taine.
5:2 “Zatar Nebula”: There was a “Zetar Nebula” used in the Star Trek (original series) episode “The Lights of Zetar”.
5:4 “Pol” is the name of Cosmic Boy’s younger brother.
6 Based on the interiors of Legion World we see later, only a handful of the planetary zones have been completed.  The green is Earth; the pink is unknown, perhaps to be Xanthu; the white is arctic, perhaps Terran or perhaps a prototype for some world like Wondil IX; the purple must be Rimbor, since that’s the right color for it and the world is mentioned as already done; no idea about the brown and pale blue zones.  It’s possible that there are other completed zones on the other pole of the world.
Dialogue is from Cosmic Boy.  Note that the caption colors are those of his costume.
7:1 Wouldn’t it be more sensible to construct it on the core of an already existing, lifeless world?
Off-panel dialogue is from Cosmic Boy.
7:2 First dialogue balloon is from Cosmic Boy, and we’ll attribute the second to Kid Quantum; it sounds like something she would say, of all the Lost Legionnaires.
7:3 Dialogue is from Cosmic Boy.  Other than Umbra, in the cape, the Legionnaires cannot be individually identified; however, there are 13 bodies and 13 individuals on board the Bouncing Boy (assuming Triad joined her bodies), so this counts as a panel appearance for each of them.
7:4 Recall that R.J. Brande made his fortune in the preboot by creating artificial stars.  Creating artificial worlds is right in line with that.
This is the merged Triad.
8:3 The Lost Legionnaires’ flight rings’ flight capabilities stopped working when they were pulled through the Rift.  Brande wouldn’t know that detail, but the fact that only the Legionnaires with native flight powers were flying in The Legion #1 would have made it evident.
Identifiable in this panel are (left to right): Chuck Taine, Cosmic Boy, Brainiac 5, Ultra Boy, Shikari, Brande, Leviathan, Saturn Girl, Chameleon, Wildfire, and Umbra.  Individual bodies for only two of the other three can be made out, so this doesn’t count as a panel appearance for Kid Quantum, Invisible Kid, or Triad.  (Unless Lyle is invisible here?)
9:1 It has long been believed that R.J. Brande isn’t just Brande, but that he is a survivor of the 20th century.  (And why not, since the preboot Brande was actually a Durlan, and later the Durlan from L.E.G.I.O.N.?)  Green Lantern: Mosaic featured a world composed of chunks of different worlds.  (Then again, so did Secret Wars, but that doesn’t make Brande the Beyonder.)
9:2 None of the characters are separately identifiable in this panel.
9:3 Identifiable here are Umbra (cape), Saturn Girl (ponytail), Shikari (wings), and Brande (platform.)
9:4 Sensor brought Gear back from Kprkrn in Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #117.  How he survived the Blight (or on what side) isn’t known.
Only twelve of the thirteen characters (plus Brande) are seen here.  Only the following are identifiable: Brainiac 5, Umbra, Ultra Boy, Wildfire, Kid Quantum, Chameleon, Brande, Invisible Kid, Saturn Girl, and Shikari.
10:1 Brainy, Lyle, and Gear could make an impressive team: Brainy can invent something, Lyle can find a use for it, and Gear can implement it on the spot.
No idea who the third dialogue balloon is from.  Brainiac 5 is in silhouette.
10:2 Kid Quantum appears a bit unnerved by Gear, but given that she came from the Uncanny Amazers, with teammates the likes of Insect Queen and Konk, it can hardly be his semi-robotic appearance.  Do I smell romance in the air?
10:4 Recall that Triad is Brande’s adopted daughter; in his absence, she would naturally assume control of his corporation.
“Subterfuge Squad,” aka “Subs”, aka a nod to the Legion of Substitute Heroes (of which Cosmic Boy lead one version of in the preboot).
10:5 Character placements in the panel are: Saturn Girl, Cosmic Boy, Invisible Kid, and Chuck Taine in the lower left; Brande, Leviathan, and the three Triads to their right; Wildfire and Shikari to their right; Brainiac 5 and Gear in the center; Ultra Boy, Chameleon, and Sensor in the upper right; and Kid Quantum and Umbra in the lower right.  The speakers are Brainiac 5, Gear, and Invisible Kid.
11:4 How huge does Brande want it to be?  Will it include the Amazers, the Heroes of Lallor, Polar Boy’s team, remnants of the WorkForce, and so on?  How many Legionnaires can Abnett and Lanning really write?  (Past creative teams have had difficulty juggling the huge cast.)  And will United Planets tax law let them have more that 25 members?
None of the characters are identifiable here, nor can we account for everyone who should be there, so no panel appearances count here other than Brande’s dialogue.
12-13 For lack of a better name, we’ll call these “interdimensional inviso-snakes.”
The blue-tinged captions here count as dialogue for M’Onel.
12:1 Did the inviso-snakes cause the storm, were they attracted to it, or did it create a dimensional rift and they came through?
13:2 It appears that a bolt of energy from an inviso-snake (like a dragon’s breath, perhaps) is passing through M’Onel, rather than an inviso-snake itself.
13:3 Titanet is the network of Titan adepts who are providing one-to-one communication across interstellar distances since the Stargate network shut down.
Is it wise for the Legion to be calling M’Onel on what appears to be an open frequency?  Of, course, Brainy would be able to encrypt the signal to prevent it being traced back to Legion World.
It’s impossible to attribute the dialogue from the Omnicom to any given Legionnaire.
14:1 Note the twin pluberry pickers; standard for Winath.  While they appear to be awfully big, 14:4 shows the space between pluberry rows.
14:2 “Falcon”: Ayla’s hat is from Falcon Studios, which is a gay porn video producer.  (Check it out here.  No question about that logo; it ain’t the Atlanta Falcons.)  Does this tell us something about either Coipel or Lanning?  (Coipel had a kid a few months before this was published.)
14:6 If it draws too much power, they’ll have to find a way to power it.  Maybe solar fusion?  Brande could create a star to power it.  (Or maybe M’Onel could just bring in a dwarf star for Brainy to analyze.)
15:2 Among other reasons to start with Ayla, she was an early member and the sister of a founder.  She, Apparition, and XS are the only early members not accounted for; Tinya’s locale is unknown, and Winath is probably easier to reach than Xanthu (and it isn’t in the middle of an invasion).
15:5 This is Mekt Ranzz, aka Lightning Lord.
16:2 They are apparently travelling at a fair clip — note Brande’s jacket fluttering in the breeze — but Brande has no problem keeping his balance.  Perhaps this is the 31st century version of the Segway?
16:5-6 Cosmic Boy won’t have to wait that long; Gates gets found next issue.
17:1 This is the new Mission Monitor Board. Pictured are all the former Legionnaires who have not yet been brought back into the fold: Spark, Andromeda, XS, Karate Kid, Thunder, Gates, Ferro, Apparition, and Star Boy.  In the Board area are Kid Quantum, Wildfire, Leviathan, Triad, Chuck Taine (since no one else is unaccounted for), Sensor (next to Umbra’s head, in the glow of the Board), Gear, Brainiac 5, and Ultra Boy.
17:1-2 Umbra is keeping to herself, brooding on her loss of powers.
17:2 Cosmic Boy is next to Triad.
Jazmin’s reaction to Gear in 10:2 is what makes the hairstyle change more notable.
18:2 “Fair Legion” is Saturn Girl.  (“Fair” means “blonde”.)
18:5 Note the new outfit for Shikari, the one seen on the cover.  The coloring of the cover version makes it look less like she’s wearing just straps than this one does.
19:1 Recall that the Rosette was a solar system-size ring of plants joined together.  It’s actually likely that most of the Rosette survived the events of Legion Lost #12, although gravity stresses will probably cause the destruction to spread throughout the ring over time (months, years, millennia?).
Dialogue is from Spark and Saturn Girl.
19:2-3 Here’s Ayla, stripping naked in front of her teammates (or behind them; she checked to see if they were looking in 18:5).  Of course, the 31st century probably has less nudity taboos than the 21st century anyway, and the preboot Winath apparently had fewer than the rest of the United Planets (although there’s no evidence that’s true in the postboot continuity).  Add to this that the Legion is a group of people working very closely together in all sorts of situations, so as occurs with performing groups and the like, changing clothes happens where it needs to happen.  In addition, consider the others on the ship: her brother’s fiancée, a reconstituted bag of energy, and by some accounts, a gay teammate; Ayla might be less at ease with the costume change in the same space as Ultra Boy.
19:4 That is Invisible Kid’s head next to Spark.
19:5 Cue the dramatic music.
20:5 Of course he has. Ra’s al Ghul has past experience nearly with overpowered aliens like M’Onel, although it’s been a few years.
21 Red solar lights: they instantly sap the powers of Daxamites, much as the did to pre-Crisis Kryptonians.  (They don’t affect post-Crisis Kryptonians nearly so quickly.)
22 This is the only page of a comic to make me drop it (in surprise) like I’ve been burned.  Impressive shock that Abnett and Lanning pulled off.
The issue is raised as to when Ra’s al Ghul replaced McCauley.  Assuming that the corpse seen in The Legion #2 actually was McCauley (and Crugg next to him), which would preclude McCauley from having always been Ra’s al Ghul, the switch probably occurred some time after Legionnaires #77 (the beach issue).  The easiest answer is to place it during the unseen interval during the Blight attack on Earth; McCauley and company were not seen at all in those issues, so it’s easy to imagine that McCauley found Ra’s al Ghul’s tomb/prison while hiding from the Blight, freed him, and was killed and replaced for his trouble.  This would put all the appearance of McCauley as President, including disbarring and disbanding the Legion, as actually acts of Ra’s al Ghul (and they would be quite consistent with him).
     The presence of Amelia Crugg and Lori Morning with McCauley after the Blight invasion are problematic, but he probably simply waited to dispose of them (Crugg was killed; Lori’s fate is unknown) until a convenient time, so as to not draw attention to himself.  Mr. Venge only showed up as his advisor after the Blight and after Crugg’s last appearance; in The Legion #11, Venge’s own true role becomes clear.
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Appearance Counts

Character Name

Cover

Panels / Speaking

Heroes
Triad (Luornu Durgo)
     (also appears as Triad-Purple,
     Triad-Orange, and
     Triad-Neutral)

X



7 / 2
4 / 1
5 / 1
5 / 1
Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn) X 19 / 13
Leviathan II (Salu Digby) X 9 / 1
Invisible Kid (Lyle Norg) X 21 / 7
Ultra Boy (Jo Nah) X 16 / 4
Kid Quantum II (Jazmin Cullen) X 13 / 4
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) X 24 / 13
Umbra (Tasmia Mallor) X 13 / 1
Brainiac 5 (Querl Dox)
X 13 / 8
Chameleon (Reep Daggle)
X 19 / 9
Wildfire (“Drake Burroughs”) X 15 / 5
Shikari X 19 / 6
M’Onel (Lar Gand) X 17 / 16
Gear (I.Z.O.R.) 5 / 4
Sensor (Princess Jeka Wynzorr) 3 / 1
Spark (Ayla Ranzz) 16 / 11
XS (Jenni Ognats) 1 / 0
Karate Kid (Val Armorr)
1 / 0
Gates (Ti’julk Mr’asz)
1 / 0
Ferro (Andrew Nolan)
1 / 0
Apparition (Tinya Wazzo-Nah)
1 / 0
Star Boy (Thom Kallor)
1 / 0
 
Andromeda (Laurel Gand)
1 / 0
Thunder (Cece Beck) 1 / 0
Villains
Ra’s al Ghul
     (also appears as President Leland McCauley)
1 / 1
10 / 9
Twine (real name unknown) 1 / 0
C.O.M.P.U.T.O.
     (appears only as Mr. Venge)
0 / 0
2 / 4
Lightning Lord (Mekt Ranzz) 1 / 1
Supporting Characters
Chuck Taine 8 / 5
R.J. Brande 18 / 18
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