Legionnaires #70

Legionnaires #70 cover

Date:

April 1999

Title:

“Enter: Domain!”
(Cover Title: “Cosmic Boy - Lost in the Worlds of Domain!”)

Credits:

Tom McCraw (Co-Plotter / Colorist) • Roger Stern (Co-Scripter) • Jeffrey Moy (Penciller) • W.C. Carani (Inker) • Pat Brosseau (Letterer) • Frank Berrios (Assistant Editor) • Mike McAvennie (Umpire [Editor]) • Carmela Merlo (Adult Legionnaire [Script Assistant]) • Chris Sprouse / Al Gordon / Patrick Martin (Cover)

Plot:

After Cosmic Boy’s former manager, Alux Cuspin, was released from prison, he hired the assassin Domain to kill Cosmic Boy.  Following a professional magnoball playoff game in which Cosmic Boy’s younger brother, Pol Krinn, is playing, Domain publicly kidnaps Cosmic Boy, Pol, a young magnoball fan, and a reporter away to another dimension.  Although he tries to kill them, teamwork between Cosmic Boy and Pol defeats Domain, and the foursome returns to the arena.  Meanwhile, Star Boy continues to deal with his power problems, and Dragonmage, in an effort to resurrect his own powers, locates a potential source on the planet Zyzan.


CHANGE HISTORY

Date of Change Content of Change
03/14/99
Posted
03/19/99
Added item to 8:1
Tracking updates from Legionnaires #71, revised grouping of Supporting Characters
03/23/99
Tracking updates from Legionnaires #71
04/21/99 
Tracking updates to list Khfeurb Chee Bez, Enwans
06/17/99
Tracking updates from Legionnaires #74
09/08/99
Tracking updates from Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #120
Unified to a single file
09/23/99
Tracking updates from Legionnaires #77
08/18/00
Tracking updates from Legion: Science Police #1
08/23/00
Name correction
12/29/02
Tracking correction
Added Appearance Counts and associated Notes
01/29/04
Tracking additions

Tinted cells and text indicate missing or incomplete information.


Character and Object Tracking

         

Name

Previous Appearance

Next Appearance

Heroes

Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn) Legionnaires #68 Legionnaires #71
Also appears in flashbacks preceding and to Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0, and to < >
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) In flashbacks to Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0 and < >
Live Wire (Garth Ranzz) In flashbacks to < > and Legionnaires #67
Star Boy (Thom Kallor) Legionnaires #69 Legionnaires #71
Chameleon (Reep Daggle) No appearance; mention only
 
Dragonmage (Xao Jin) Legionnaires #<51> Legionnaires #71
Lady Mysa Legionnaires #<51> Legionnaires #71
Dreamer (Nura Nal) Legionnaires #68 Legionnaires #71

Villains

Alux Cuspin Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0 Legionnaires #71
Also appears in flashbacks preceding Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0
Domain None None to date
 
Mordru (Prince Wrynn of Topaz) No appearance; mention only
Xotar In flashback to Legionnaires #68

Supporting Characters

Warden Sur None Legionnaires #74
Pol Krinn Legionnaires #53 Legionnaires #71
Hu Krinn None Legionnaires #71
Ewa Krinn None Legionnaires #71
Giselle King None None to date
Khfeurb Chee Bez (aka Antenna Boy) None None to date
Lori Morning In flashback to Legionnaires #69
Dirk Morgna Legionnaires #43 Legionnaires #71
Kuniko (magnoball fan) None Legionnaires #71
Dyrk Magz < > Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #114
 
Andrea (Carnival performer) No appearance; poster only
unnamed sports reporter None None to date
Terran Lodestones magnoball team (footnote #1) None None to date
Braalian Meteors magnoball team None Legionnaires #71
Braalian Meteors coach None Legionnaires #71
Zyzan guardian None None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Characters:
     unnamed prison guards (2)
     unnamed Sorcerers’ World acolytes (2)
     unnamed staff at Brazilian café (3)
     unnamed Braalian kids playing magnoball (6)
     unnamed Braalian citizens (5)
     unnamed magnoball fans (uncountable)
     unnamed sportscasters (3); one may be Antenna Lad
     unnamed Science Police officers (2)
     unnamed medical team members (2)
     Pikachu
     Ryo-Ohki

Locations

Sorcerers’ World < > None to date
Zyzan None Legionnaires #71
 
Roundrock Prison, California Archipelago Legion: Science Police #1 None to date
Sanfrangopolis, California Archipelago None None to date
Warden’s office, Roundrock Prison None Legionnaires #74
Training chamber, Sorcerers’ World None None to date
São Paulo, Brazil None Legionnaires #71
Tokyo None Legionnaires #71
Tokyo Stadium None Legionnaires #71
Legion headquarters, Metropolis Legionnaires #69 None to date
Mission monitor room, Legion HQ Legionnaires #69 Legionnaires #71
Library, Sorcerers’ World None None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Locations:
     unnamed café, São Paulo, Brazil
     unspecified playground, practice court, and stadium, all presumably on Braal
     settings presented by Domain (Dali, Munch, anime, Kirbytech, Escher, and Van Gogh)

Alien Races and Creatures

Luck Lord (footnote #2) Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #100 (in flashback) Legionnaires #77
Enwan (yellow featureless face) < > None to date
Probe < > None to date
 
One-shot or Untracked Creatures:
     “Tortoisians”
     “Black Lagooni”

Technology

Alux Cuspin’s cane Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0 None to date
Levitating furniture Legionnaires #68 Legionnaires #71
Legion flight ring < > Legionnaires #71
Sorcerers’ World focal pattern None  None to date
Magnoball < > Legionnaires #71
Magnoball practice court Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0 None to date
Credit chip <None> None to date
Vid screens < > None to date
Holovid cameras < > Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #120
Personal holo camera None None to date
Gravcar Legionnaires #69 Legionnaires #71
 
One-shot or Untracked Items:
     candle
     sun visor
     gravbus
     miniature holo-recorder
     Dragonmage’s shuttle


1. The Magnoball teams will be treated as a single unit at the current time.  If we later find out individual names for the players, the teams will be broken down into members.  Pol Krinn will, of course, be treated separate from the rest of the Braalian Meteors.

2. Luck Lords cannot, as yet, be differentiated from one another.  There is no way to tell if this is the one to whom one of Tinya’s bodies was given as an infant.  All Luck Lords are tracked as a unit for now.

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Analysis Notes

Credits Carmela Merlo is Roger Stern’s wife, and does a lot of plotting/scripting work with (or for) him.
1:1 Roundrock Prison is supposed to evoke Alcatraz.  In that event, the city seen here is Sanfrangopolis (or so it was known in the preboot), the 30th century megacity encompassing the entire California coast from San Francisco to Los Angeles (and beyond).  The bridge in the background would be the 30th century version of the Golden Gate Bridge.
The reference to the California Archipelago indicates that a massive earthquake (the real Big One) occurred at some point, destroying much of the coastline.  The logical event to cause this would be the nuclear exchange (or similar event) known as the Great Disaster (see Kamandi, Hex, and Time Masters for more information), although it could also be the result of a superhero battle (such as the ones which destroyed Coast City and Santa Marta in the 20th century - both of which were on the California coast - but on a larger scale).
As an interesting aside, the design for the new Golden Gate Bridge seen here has a degree of similarity to ones proposed for the construction of a replacement for the Bay Bridge in the late 1990’s.
It is unclear how long ago “four months” would be in terms of published comics; between two and three times as long, probably.  For lack of any better time, assume that this occurred while Cosmic Boy was trapped in the 20th century, which would ensure he had no opportunity to react to Cuspin’s release.
1:2 This is the first time we have known Crispin’s first name.
“Warden Sur” could have indicated a descendant or relative of Abin Sur, Hal Jordan’s predecessor as Green Lantern of Space Sector 2816.  His appearance here is Terran, though, so perhaps it is a California reference to Big Sur (about 2-3 hours south of San Francisco).
1:3 Recall that Saturn Girl had indicated that Cuspin’s embezzlement should earn him several years time on Takron-Galtos, but instead he got away with perhaps two years in a Terran prison.  Assuming Imra was not exaggerating for effect, this probably means that Cuspin had a good lawyer.
Recovery of some of the embezzled funds or a good word from Rokk Krinn might have also contributed to a lessened sentence.
“Time”?  While the Time Trapper has expressed an interest in Rokk Krinn, specifically, there is no evidence of his hand in this.
1:4 Cosmic Boy only adopted that costume after Cuspin had been arrested, which explains why the outfit is incomplete in his mental image.  In particular, note the concept of the flight ring being something held onto rather than worn as jewelry
1:5 Curious that the 30th century doesn’t do any sort of psychic probing of prisoners who are paroled, or even who had served out their entire sentence as may be the case here.  (This is doubly odd when the presence of telepaths is added to the equation.)  Perhaps this is deemed a violation of rights in the postboot.  Or it might be reserved only for violent crimes, which embezzlement does not fall under.  Or perhaps different prisons have different systems, and Cuspin’s lawyers got him into Roundrock because of its relative laxness in this area.
2 The “word balloons” from the acolytes on this page are presumably “magical telepathy” of some sort.
2:1 In the preboot, Sorcerers’ World was the 30th century name for Gemworld (see Amethyst, Princess of Gemworld).  The ruling houses of Gemworld were focused around twelve giant gemstones, each of which corresponded to the birthstones familiar to Western culture.  The focal pattern Dragonmage is sitting in appears to have eight gemstones embedded in it; in the Amethyst, Princess of Gemworld series, eight houses were on one side, four on the other.  The eight “good” houses were Topaz, Emerald, Turquoise, Aquamarine, Garnet, Ruby, Diamond, and Amethyst; the “evil” ones were Sardonyx, Opal, Moonstone, and Sapphire.  With the exception of Aquamarine, which should be very pale blue, the eight stones here correspond to the eight “good” houses in Amethyst, Princess of Gemworld; assume a coloring error on the purple stone in the upper right
There are twelve unreadable symbols in the outer symbol, between the gemstone, triangle, and circle protrusions.
The purpose of the gold monoliths in the pattern is unclear.
Observe the “crescent and dot” symbol in the triangles in front of and behind Dragonmage.  These are the same as Kinetix’ symbol.
2:2 The candle appears to merely be a focus object for Dragonmage, rather than an object of power.
2:2-6 Observe that this indicates that Xao’s powers are merely damaged, that his ability to control them is weak and if he loses his concentration, they flare out of control.  Compare to Magno, whose powers were stripped away in the same battle.
3:1 Three weeks ago is probably shortly after the Dark Circle Rising story completed.
“Carnival” is the big Mardi Gras-related party in Brazil.  As will be seen on Legionnaires #71, this café is probably in São Paulo.
We’ll call the tortoise-like aliens “Tortoisians.”
The poster of the green woman with the feathered outfit is typical of a Carnival costume, except for the skin color.  From 4:3, she can be seen to be an alien, although not Coluan.  She could be the same race as President Chu’s bodyguards were.
Interlac translation (poster of woman): “andrea”.  This is pieced together from 3:1 and 4:3-5, with most of the name readable in 4:5.  Here, there is a coloring error in the portion of the “d” beneath the drink umbrella; the red and green areas are reversed.
Interlac translation (vidscreen to the right): “omn” or “omm”.  Best guess would be “Omnicaster,” as an indicator of what the screen is for (news broadcast), although the bottoms of the letters in 3:2 do not match that word.
The screen to the right appears to be displaying a water-based ship of some sort, probably a cruise ship.
3:2 Interlac translation: the green text says “magnob”[all].  The red text says “tokyo” and “9 pm”.
The white and red object is a magnoball.  The visual design of it is based on the pokéball from the Pokémon anime.
3:3 This flashback probably occurs when Rokk was about age 10.
Cuspin was apparently scouting talent when he discovered Rokk.  He was at least already established as a coach at the time, and this continues to support the idea that he is a former magnoball champion himself who was injured and had to retire from active play.
3:4 This flashback probably occurs when Rokk was about age 12.  For lack of other information, assume it occurs on Braal.
Note the similarity to the magnoball practice court Rokk used in Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0.
Cuspin’s comments here further indicate that he is a somewhat disgruntled former athlete.
3:5 This flashback probably occurs shortly before Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0, and is where Rokk gained the “Cosmic Boy” nickname.
The green robed being is a Luck Lord.  They run the gambling casinos on Ventura.
Interlac translation: “39”, obviously a stadium gate number.
4:1 This is a flashback to Legion of Super-Heroes v4 #0.
Cuspin may try to revenge on Saturn Girl at some point, also.
4:2 This is a flashback to < >.  (The characters are wearing flight rings, which puts it after < >, yet before Legionnaires #31, where Garth lost his arm.)
4:4 The transparent umbrella is presumably polarized to reduce the glare from the sun over head.
4:5 Domain appears to always appear through a rectangular defined area, such as this poster.  Some teleporters have a sort of “door” limitation, such as < > from Fallen Angels and the Doormen from Siren.
5:1 Based on one of the women in 3:1, the man in the brown jacket is a waiter.
5:4 The design of 30th century Tokyo seems to owe a debt to Katushiro Otomo’s Akira anime.
5:5 In the preboot, Cosmic Boy and Magnetic Kid’s parents were Hu and Ewa Krinn.  As seen in Legionnaires #71, those names are still accurate.
The yellow alien behind Mrs. Krinn is an Enwan.  The green one resembles the Creature from the Black Lagoon; call it a “Black Lagooni”.
6:1 Magnoball has been shown as both a solo sport (a lá tennis) and a team sport (like basketball or hockey).  All evidence points to Rokk as having been a solo magnoball star, rather than part of a team.  (Although he may have been that, too.)
6:2 Interlac translation (overhead sign): “rs vs. ores”.  Based on the color schemes and such, these are the names of the magnoball teams.  The one on the left (blue and red) is the Braalian Meteors, but the other one should be Lodestones, not “Ores”.
One spectator if holding a sign that starts with “W”; another has one that says “NDY”; a third has a picture of a deep sea fish on it.  No idea what these refer to.
Interlac translation (sign with magnoball): “pokémon”, referring to the anime/manga series and video game, which feature a host of pocket-sized “monsters” that are captured, trained, and pitted against one another in battle.  The anime series is notorious for the video effects in one episode having induced epileptic seizures in some viewers in Japan.
Interlac translation (yellow sign): “sl???”  Possibly “Slice”, a reference to the 7-Up clone soda, since many arena signs will advertise food and drink.
There are five members of each magnoball team shown, reinforcing the basketball analogue.
No one in the crowd is recognizable, although the white-haired man on the right side could be a Science Police officer or Hunter from the Linear Men.  (Doubtful, though, so the character isn’t tracked.)
7:1 The blond man is presumably a sportscaster, like the seated woman, while the blue-skinned man (who is not a Talokian; too light) is team management (as will be seen in Legionnaires #71), like Giselle King.
Ah, so the Terran team uses Braalian immigrants rather than technological magnetism producers.  Of course, this makes sense, as introducing tech into the equation introduces an easy avenue for cheating.
7:3 No idea what the sign in the crowd is supposed to be.
7:4 They seem to be tracking both the individuals and the team.  Although statistics are kept on individuals in 20th century team sports, there isn’t usually any real competition within the team for best statistics (with the exception of cases where a record of some sort is being strived for).  This would make magnoball truly unique.
7:5 Saturn Girl must have pulled Xotar’s identity from his head before he escaped.  Cosmic Boy had no other way to know his identity.
Cosmic Boy’s head shot is part of this panel.
8:1 The presumed sportscaster wearing the magnoball jacket has a bald head and odd shaped ears; this would be Khfeurb Chee Bez, the preboot Antenna Boy.  He was last seen in the preboot as a newscaster, so this is in line for the character.
The blue-colored man will be seen to be the coach of the Braalian Mteors in the next issue.
Dirk Morgna was Sun Boy in the preboot, and longtime member of the Legion.  This time around, the Emerald Eye took his powers away during a battle with Dr. Regulus.
8:2 “Running in the red” would be appropriate for a redhead.
It is nice to see Dirk being given a supporting character role after having been ignored for the past two years.
8:5 Coloring error: the Terran player here should be Caucasian, as in 8:4 and based on the other players seen in 6:2.
Is the collision between Pol and the other player a foul of any sort?  It would be in basketball, but probably not in hockey.
9:1-2 The girl with the white suspenders is based on Misty from Pokémon: The Tale of Electric Pikachu. Her name here is Kuniko.
9:1 The reporter in the green dress is holding what must be a miniature holo-recorder, not unlike 20th century dictaphones.
9:3 Interlac translation: “silver ale”, a popular 30th century drink holding a market position similar to Coca-Cola does today.  It is unclear whether it is alcoholic or not.
9:5 Observe that Domain’s powers involve a white mist or light.  He was stated to be a dimension traveller earlier; his powers do not seem to involve time travel, at least at this point, as that effect would color his power effect.
10:1 The setting is based on Salvador Dali’s painting “The Persistence of Memory.”
Kuniko’s autographed magnoball disappeared.  Perhaps Domain’s powers and its tech are incompatible?
Domain’s transparent body counts as a panel appearance.
10:2 The setting is based on Edvard Munch’s painting “The Scream.”
10:3 The yellow creature is Pikachu (an electric mouse) from Pokémon, in its powered-up form. The rabbit creature is Ryo-Ohki, from Tenchi Muyo, another anime.  The gray and red spiral is unidentified.
10:4 The setting is based on Jack Kirby’s work.
Domain’s eyes count as a panel appearance.
“Perspective” refers to the final setting, in 11:1.
11:1 The setting is based on the works of M.C. Escher, especially “Relativity” (but also “Belvedere,” “Convex and Concave,” “House of Stairs,” and “Waterfall”).
Despite the thick black edge on the stairs, everything above the lower-right corner is a single panel.
Domain’s transparent head counts as a panel appearance.
11:2 Star Boy has been grounded until his powers stabilize and is on long-term monitor duty.
Legion flight rings include communicators.
12:2 Dyrk Magz used to be Magno, but he lost his powers fighting Mordru, just like Dragonmage did.  He is now the permanent staff member at the Legion Outpost.
“Outpost Allon” is the formal name of the Legion Outpost, named for Gim Allon, the deceased Legionnaire Leviathan I.
Although Dyrk and Dreamer have never been seen to have met, they probably encountered each other while he was still on Earth.  They may well have met during the Legion tryouts in Legionnaires #43.
12:3 Interlac translation: “[???]ction [???]in?ted” - must be “Connection Terminated”.
“Bizarre” referring to Bizarro.
Dreamer is precognitive, getting glimpses of the future when she sleeps.  The dreams are said to always be true, but they can often be misinterpreted.
12:5 We have been told Thom will survive to become Starman VIII under the name “Danny Blaine,” according to Starman v2 #50.  The truth of that remains to be seen, of course.  And it is not clear yet where that issue falls into Legion continuity.
12:6 It is unclear how far ahead these “tough times” are.  Probably to Legionnaires #72, where he faces the Elementals of Disaster alone.
13:2 “Danger, Xao Jin! Danger!”  It looks new because it “wants” you to pick it up and read it.
Coloring error: the semi-shaved hair on the side of Dragonmage’s head should be blue-black, not flesh colored.
13:5 It is unclear why the steps crumbled.  Perhaps simply to get across why Kuniko is tumbling to a different staircase.
14:4 They were steps going up, until about halfway up, when they became steps going down to the next platform.
The risk in using the flight ring would presumably be that the conflicting gravitational fields in this setting might change to quickly for Rokk to react.  Any significant speed could end up sending him hurtling head first into one of the staircases or platforms.
15:3 Peculiarly, the size of Domain’s legs below the platform that Rokk and Kuniko is on doesn’t seem to match what is seen above the platform.
16:2 “The fabric of infinity”?  Could Domain be the postboot analogue of the Infinite Man?  Certain aspects of his costume design echo that.
16:3 The setting within Domain is based on Vincent Van Gogh’s painting “The Starry Night.”
16:4 Rokk broke any magnoball contracts and promotional deals he had signed to found the Legion.  Presumably such was done legally, with the help of R.J. Brande’s lawyers (and funds).
17:1 Cosmic Boy’s uniform disks are detachable, giving him a weapon to use at a distance.  David Goldfarb was responsible for suggesting this innovation.
17:3 Domain doesn’t play fair, changing the setting in the middle of the game.
17:4 Cosmic Boy twisted his body to take the impact himself, sparing Kuniko.
18:1 Ah, teamwork!
18:2 More teamwork.
From the blue lines indicating magnetic fields, it appears that the reporter is also Braalian, exerting a field to anchor herself while Pol flips from his platform to hers.
18:3 In other words, he is using Pol as a gravitational source to bounce his powers off for flight purposes.  Gravity is a reasonably weak force; with Pol close enough and projecting strong enough, Rokk is able to largely ignore the gravity of the Escher setting.
18:4 Very curious that Domain should use the same wording that Kuniko did - “moving so easily now.”  This might indicate a connection between the two of them, but it’s probably just a dialoguing gaffe.
19:3 Like Cuspin’s unhappiness would be a surprise?  Rokk’s departure for the Legion destroyed his lucrative livelihood and sent him to prison for a couple years.
20:3-4 It is unclear why the giant balls suddenly converged on this position.  There is no evidence that they were acting other than randomly before.  The answer obviously lies in the field Rokk was projecting.  Although most materials are not ferromagnetic and thus difficult for Rokk to manipulate, perhaps with the strength of his field, he was able to affect the balls slightly, enough to mimic gravity and draw them toward him.  (Magnetism is one of the universal forces, along with gravity and the strong and weak nuclear forces.)  How he was able to limit this to the balls without affecting Domain, the other people in the setting, or the setting itself is unclear.  (Bad Legion Science™, perhaps.)
21:2 The explosion appears to have shredded Domain himself and not just his costume.  This indicates that the settings are either creations of his or pre-existing locales (parts of Hypertime, perhaps?) which he accesses, rather than somehow being part of him.
21:4-5 Raise your hand, anyone who thinks Domain is dead.
And once again, Cosmic Boy earns the eternal enmity of an unimaginably powerful foe.  First the Time Trapper, now Domain.  Talk about your overachievers!
21:7 It would appear that the foursome was gone for at least several minutes their time, but probably only a few seconds in the real world.  Otherwise, people would not have still been in their seats.
22:3 Dragonmage’s display here supports the idea that it is his level of control and focus that is gone.  He can do big, destructive magic, but not subtle, constructive tasks.
22:4 This guardian is probably a ghost, but could be an astral projection of some sort.

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Appearance Counts

Character Name

Cover

Panels / Speaking

Heroes
Cosmic Boy (Rokk Krinn)
X 63 / 51
Saturn Girl (Imra Ardeen) 2 / 0
Live Wire (Garth Ranzz) 2 / 0
Star Boy (Thom Kallor) 6 / 6
 
Dragonmage (Xao Jin) 4 / 5
Lady Mysa 4 / 5
Dreamer (Nura Nal) 6 / 6
Villains
Alux Cuspin 15 / 15
Domain
X 27 / 33
 
Xotar 1 / 0
Supporting Characters
Warden Sur 3 / 3
Pol Krinn
X 26 / 17
Mr. (Hu) Krinn 4 / 3
Mrs. (Ewa) Krinn 4 / 3
Giselle King 4 / 5
Khfeurb Chee Bez (aka Antenna Boy) 1 / 0
Lori Morning 1 / 0
Dirk Morgna 4 / 5
Kuniko (magnoball fan) X 32 / 13
Dyrk Magz 1 / 1
 
Andrea (Carnival performer)
4 / 0
unnamed sports reporter X 17 / 7
Terran Lodestones magnoball team 3 / 0
Braalian Meteors magnoball team 7 / 2
Braalian Meteors coach 1 / 0
Zyzan guardian 3 / 3
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